Showing posts with label How to Write for Television. Show all posts
Showing posts with label How to Write for Television. Show all posts

Tuesday, 5 August 2014

THE TREATMENT




Oh yes... the treatment. 

Now that you pitched your idea, is time to put it on a TREATMENT. And what is a treatment?
Basically it's the first outline of your story, high-lighting key scenes, characters and the locations and any other important detail that you need to keep in mind not only for you but also for the producers you are going to present your idea.

When you write your treatment you need to remember that the other people don't see inside your brain. It means that you really need to write a clear and comprehensive text.

No one is going to guess what you mean unless you are putting it on the paper and they can read it. So, forget your philosophic and cool way of being an intellectual and poetic person and be pragmatic on your treatment. Black on white. Anyone you read it must understand it in one go.

Here some tips that I caught in the last BBC Drama Festival, about treatment:

·                     The main idea must be explained in no more than two pages.
·                     You need a good title!
·                     Initial 2 or 3 paragraphs about the idea. (A young wizard boy who goes to a magic school and have to fight against a powerful dark forces). Any idea of this one? See, very easy and simple ideas.
·                     A set describing the story or series. (This is a series of 13 episodes of 50 minutes, for young adults... bla bla bla).
Now, if you are creating a series you need to create the entire treatment of the first episode, and then in a very resumed way the rest of the episodes. What is going to happen in the other episodes.
This will take about 5 or 6 pages and remember to be clear. 

In the actual very fast TV industry context, the series are starting with six episodes (used to be 13). Since the TV Channels and producers don't want to take risks they buy a short series of episodes to see how it goes with the audiences. But this can vary depending of the channel and the type of work. If you watch the BBC British drama series, some are even smaller with just 3 episodes mini-series. Other countries are still following the 13 episodes series (even if sometime they axe them in the middle...).

Right, let’s move forward, the next part of your treatment is the character list description.  I didn't wrote about characters yet, because I will do it in the future as one of the most important and complex things in your stories. But for your treatment you going to need it all done before. Soon I will return to this. 

Finally, to finish your treatment you need to write an output. Here you are going to explain in a very short way:

·                     WHY THE IDEA IS SO GREAT?
·                     WHY IS DIFFERENT?
·                     WHY IT FITS ON A CERTAIN TV CHANNEL? or if you prefer, WHERE MY STORY FITS?

Let’s put this on an extreme, if you write something about violent crime or sexual content, you are not going to expect to sell it to CBBC... isn't it? So being smoother, Sex and Blood fits on BBC? Maybe not, really depends what you are selling. An historical about the WWII, definitively a big yes. They love it!

So, you have two ways of work: 

You research what channel best suites what you want to write, or, write targeting a specific channel from the beginning. On the TV channel sites for submissions you can see what they are looking for. Just do it and look for it.

Hope this help you. Today it was a bit of boring material but very important! And remember, the treatment is not only for the others. The treatment is also for you! You need to keep in mind what you planned for your story and characters or you going to float everywhere and that's not good after you start. Floating is just that very beginning when you pitching.

CYA SOON


Wednesday, 30 July 2014

BE TRUE TO YOUR STORY!

 
 
Today I just want to explain this bit of "Be true!".
When I wrote in the "So, lets start writing!" post that you need to be true in your story, that doesn't mean that you can't have, for instance, a fantasy in your story. (Fantasy is everywhere!!)  
What I really mean is that you need to create the universe of your story, and that universe must be true!
 
Let me give you an example:
 
In the "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" the  universe that Roald Dahl created accepts that there is a garden of sweets with a chocolate waterfall, and that you can eat the grass and the flowers are candy.
 
Perfect. So it's part of the universe of the story and no one gets surprised that could happen. We have the working squirrels, the blueberry chewing gum which tastes like a complete meal, Mike TV tele-transported and broadcast... everything makes sense in the story. Why? Because when  you sit in front of the screen watching the movie (or reading the book), everythings fits among the others fantasies of the story.
 
Now, lets pick a James Bond movie, any of them. James Bond is making a massive shooting against all the evil people, smashing as much cars as possible, maybe some planes too... sundenly a massive attack of zombies come from the USSR! (Oh my God, I just pitch an idea... but let's stick with the ORIGINAL 007). For the universe of the stories of James Bond, zombies don't make sense! There is no zombies in the cold war (well maybe one or two).
 
Thats what I meant about to be true in your story.
 
It is acceptable to have edible grass in Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, it is not acceptable to have zombies in James Bond adventures (the closest you get is the people of Baron Samedi).
 
The truthfulness must extend not only to the story, but also on the characters, places, speech etc etc etc. Everything must be true to your universe.

Hope this makes sense.

See you soon and keep in touch for the next posts.


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Monday, 28 July 2014

Celebrating 5.000 visitors!

 
I want to thank you all
for the first 5.000 visits to
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Truly impressed!
Thank You, once again,
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Saturday, 26 July 2014

So, Lets start writing!

 
I decided to start some very basic tips on how to start writing a story. These can be applied for scripts, for a book, for a stage play etc.
One of the mistakes that many people do when they start writing is not making a plan or a treatment. They wake up in the morning and think "I want to write a story", and they run to the notebook and start to write frantically.
 
Now, stop right there!
 
Lets start from the beginning. Before you put your pen on the paper think about:
 
What story I want to tell?
 
Is it a true story? Is it an adventure? A Romance? A comedy? A sci-fi? Whatever....
 
This is the moment you PITCH your idea. (remember this word, it going to follow you for the rest of your scriptwriting career).
 
So, when you pitch your idea make sure you know exactly what you want to do. Take notes, think about it, be sure you are comfortable with the subject. If you are thinking about an era, make sure you have resources and where to research. If you want that your work come out of basics, be true!
 
BE TRUE TO YOUR STORY!
 
Research, research research! Check every detail about your story. It happens in 1800 something? So what the people used to wear at that time? What food they used to eat? Check it all.
 
Try different resources, books, internet, archives... It doesn't take too long for you to have an idea of the era you want to write about it. This not only give you the opportunity to be as much accurate as possible but, not rarely, gives you extra ideas and details to fill your story.
 
Of course, if you have the habit of reading, let's say, since you were a kid, that will help you even more. One thing that's very difficult to get in a short time is GENERAL CULTURE. Start right now to incentivise your kids to read. If they ask you something don't answer! (Yes don't do that) Tell them to check an encyclopedia or a dictionary. I'm serious! Don't be easy with this if you want a outstanding kid! They will thank you in the future. Ok, if he asks you "what time is it?" or "What is the dinner?" you can answer those ones!
 
For today, this tip: Research, investigate and create a world to your story that is TRUE.
 
I will keep on the subject on the future posts.
 
See you around!

Saturday, 17 May 2014

Great Books: How to Write for Television by William Smethurst



Great Books: How to Write for Television by William Smethurst


This is a great book if you want to write for television. It's clear, pragmatic and very useful.
That's what I call a honest book. It gives you real information of the process of writing for TV and all the pre-selling tips about the industry, what the producers want to see, what ways you should go and how to approach them. Here and there maybe you find some out of date points (the industry methods run so fast) but it is in fact one of the best books about writing and selling for TV. Nude and real. No fait divers.

Definitely a book to have. More than 200 pages for less than £10!!!

http://www.amazon.co.uk/How-Write-Television-William-Smethurst/dp/1845283805